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Comparison-me,star 02-18-2010

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     Why doesn't anyone accept me? I feel so alone. My love was taken from me like a jewel by a thief. i feel like that lone dying star, losing its shine out in the abyss of the black night sky. The others are in communion with one another. They are shining brightly in formation for all to see. Even in the midst of the deepest darkness that swallows all light, it shines bright as if it were the sun to all evil.
     I can't be that star. I'm nothing in the blackness. I just add to the mystery of what is beyond. They all have a place, in some formation of belonging. I am nothing. You know that star that is barely visible to the naked eye? That is me; barely visible in the crowd next to the bright shining group of those that belong. I'm slipping through the cracks, not being noticed as a struggling life clinging to what little life it has left within. Hanging on seems to be a worthless effort at this point. Why can't I flourish and shine like the rest of them? In being the star that is dim to the point of little recognition, I exploded a long time ago. I just wasn't noticed until now, when it is too late to save me.
     All stars explode. It's just that the majority of them are noticed and saved while they are still shining brightly enough for people to see. I don't have that privilege.

I wrote this one night after me and my mom got in a huge fight. When we fight (which is quite often), I honestly don't feel that she cares and that there is no point any longer. That is how I was feeling when I wrote this.
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:hug: I'm here if you wanna talk. ^^